[Complete][SC - At Vote] Commend Helaw

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Commend Helaw
Category: Commendation | Nominee: Helaw
Proposed by: Nueva Rico | Onsite Topic


This esteemed Security Council,

Recognizing the extensive administrative, diplomatic, and organizational work Helaw has performed in the six regions under the banner of the Augustin Alliance, helping to create and maintain a secure union for over 650 unique nations; inciting activity, helping to solve problems and defuse conflicts thoughtfully as they arise, and aiding the alliance to the victories of the two worldwide nuclear wars, popularized as "N-Day",

Acknowledging Helaw’s tenure as delegate in the Ridgefield, the first of the recently rebuilt region, and in Conch Kingdom, where they composed an astonishing 57 voting recommendations, emphasizing the progressive and transparent attitude Helaw has shown in regards to the World Assembly, setting a steady foundation that allowed the two regions to grow, even in the wake of a temporary dissolution of the Augustin Alliance,

Lauding the character of their influence on the development of both Ridgefield, where they currently serve as Judge, to become the most active World Assembly-only region in the world - home to 64 active nations, and Tempest, a rapidly growing, strictly democratic region with a sophisticated political system, by the puppet founding nation Ventus Imperatoris,

Extolling Helaw’s duty to the creation, organization, and administration of both the Augustin Alliance community forum, one of the largest and most active in the world, and an issue discussion forum which extended constructive advice and criticism, to countless novice and experienced nations alike, in bringing relevant global issues to light in the most efficient and eloquent manner,

Furthermore awed by the magnanimity of Helaw’s scope of work in the international community,

Bringing attention to the national issue of potential peril posed by petitions in ‘Playful Petitions Pester Politicians.’

GA#402 “Repeal: ‘World Assembly Central Medicinal Database Compact’”, which sought to end ineffective regulatory legislation.

SC#235 “Commend Candlewhisper Archives”, which duly recognized the tremendous services of a fellow nation prominent in the international community.

Asserting that the nation of Helaw has diligently served as a prime example for excellence, efficiency, and tenacity to each and every state of the international community;

Hereby commends Helaw.

Co-authored with DiRito-Opolis.

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"Inciting activity"? Is that the right choice of words?
Also, this sentence makes no sense:
Extolling Helaw’s duty to the creation, organization, and administration of both the Augustin Alliance community forum,

Was this commendation drafted with the help of the onsite forum community? If so, standards have dropped.

this commendation contains a lot of generalisations and filler. It looks to me as if the proposer was hunting around for things to pad out the CV.

I'm against, for the above reasons.
 
TlomzKrano:
Recognizing the extensive administrative, diplomatic, and organizational work Helaw has performed in the six regions under the banner of the Augustin Alliance, helping to create and maintain a secure union for over 650 unique nations; inciting activity, helping to solve problems and defuse conflicts thoughtfully as they arise, and aiding the alliance to the victories of the two worldwide nuclear wars, popularized as "N-Day",
Let's break this down.

Didn't we already commend the Augustin Alliance thing? Wasn't that Forrest's Commendation? 'Inciting activity' isn't even a commendable thing in of itself. Cormac incites activity. Unibot incites activity. Coupers incite activity.

I'd like to know how many of the 'over 650 unique nations' actually are unique nations and not puppets...
Acknowledging Helaw’s tenure as delegate in the Ridgefield, the first of the recently rebuilt region, and in Conch Kingdom, where they composed an astonishing 57 voting recommendations, emphasizing the progressive and transparent attitude Helaw has shown in regards to the World Assembly, setting a steady foundation that allowed the two regions to grow, even in the wake of a temporary dissolution of the Augustin Alliance,
So they were a delegate... wow... is 57 even that impressive? How many do our recent WA Ministers have? Or any members of the MoWAA? Can we commend them?
Lauding the character of their influence on the development of both Ridgefield, where they currently serve as Judge, to become the most active World Assembly-only region in the world - home to 64 active nations, and Tempest, a rapidly growing, strictly democratic region with a sophisticated political system, by the puppet founding nation Ventus Imperatoris,
This isn't accurate. I've a little but not much doubt Ridgefield had 64 'active nations' when this was drafted, but of the 80 nations currently in the region, 15 of them aren't in WA, including some who have never been in the WA despite being in the region for some time, rendering the point about Ridgefield, false. Tempest is also both far too new a region to put into this commendation - it seems to have existed in in its current form for about a month, and could easily be abandoned by this time next year.

Furthermore awed by the magnanimity of Helaw’s scope of work in the international community,
This says nothing.
Bringing attention to the national issue of potential peril posed by petitions in ‘Playful Petitions Pester Politicians.’

GA#402 “Repeal: ‘World Assembly Central Medicinal Database Compact’”, which sought to end ineffective regulatory legislation.

SC#235 “Commend Candlewhisper Archives”, which duly recognized the tremendous services of a fellow nation prominent in the international community
So an issue, a repeal and a WASC resolution. Not the deepest resume is it?
 
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