OOC: Añola

Cronaal:
Syrixia:
Cronaal:
wooo.
Since I already did my 'Carlos got fucked up by some guy he spent thousands on training in foreign countries to guard him' you guys can continue.
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Maybe the Guard becomes the new king and stages a coup and there's a battle and mission impossible and mission impossible?
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Well I'd like him to surprise you guys a little more, won't say how unless you pester me on IRC.
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Can you guys pester him on IRC for me? I won't be on until 5:30.
 
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Nebula seriously.
I understand you're on a mobile device but that's ridiculous and I will not consider that a simple 1 liner and a sound effect happened, the King's Guard lives.
 
I'll try.

EDIt: I'm going to write a draft and place it here for you to post, after you refine it and then give it your approval, Nebula.
 
As the doors shot open, forced from their original position by the explosive power of the grenade, the AFI team barged their way through into the throne room. After briefly looking around for the king, with no success, one happened to catch a glance of something dangling from the chains hooked to the ceiling. He focused his attention on it, and then recoiled in horror. It was a naked, mutilated body, with blood dripping down onto the floor. The first thoughts racing through his head were ones of anger, anger that Carlos would do such a thing to a fellow innocent human being. However, as he gazed towards the face of the corpse, he realised it wasn't the body of the Syrixian. As he examined its head, he realised... he realised that it was the body of King Carlos. "Holy shit..." the AFI agent muttered.

After a brief period of time spent gazing in shock at the corpse, he called out to his fellow AFI agents. "You need to see this!" he shouted out. "Someone's killed Carlos, and hung him up!"

As the other agents gazed up in dread, he noticed a glimmer of polished silver. It was another guard, clad in medieval armour and brandishing an enormous, bloodstained steel sword. Without thinking, the AFI agent raised his umbrella and squeezed the trigger once, two times, three times, into the chest of the guard. The bullets easily pierced the armour without being hindered, before going through the guard's chest. Each bullet spun and fragmented, shredding the guard's internal organs. The first pierced the intestines, pulverizing the membrane, causing the smell of half-digested food and faecal matter to spread throughout the room. The second minced the liver and stomach, and the third annihilated the heart and lungs.

The other agents heard the commotion, and quickly turned their attention towards the scene. Watching the guard collapse onto the floor. The shooter calmly walked towards the guard's corpse and pressed the trigger once more, into the guard's skull. The body convulsed once more, and then was still.

"Looks like this guy came to finish off the King." he noted, gesturing with his umbrella towards the bloodstained blade, which had clattered out of the guard's hand. "Well, we'd better start untying him" he finished, before stepping towards the rest of the group. "What are we waiting for?



So, whaddaya think?
 
Probably Nebs, though he should give you credit at the bottom of the post.

EDIT: Actually we should edit it a bit. There's no mention of the CIT, who were in there too.
 
Syrixia: I had a tunnel dug specially for this, hence why I thought they would be nowhere near the throne room.

Nebula: Feel free to edit it as much as you want. I only wrote an idea, it was there to be refined and restructured.
 
I still find it unrealistic that a trained soldier would simply shoot at the first person they see when they discover a dead king.
 
Well, it's drilled into their heads to kill any threat instantly; it's in the minds of all soldiers. Since they were tasked with disposing of the guards, they killed this one. You wouldn't stop to think about it; the instant you see a threat, you would dispose of it.
 
As the doors shot open, forced from their original position by the explosive power of the grenade, the AFI team barged their way through into the throne room. After briefly looking around for the king, with no success, one happened to catch a glance of something dangling from the chains hooked to the ceiling. He focused his attention on it, and then recoiled in horror. It was a naked, mutilated body, with blood dripping down onto the floor. The first thoughts racing through his head were ones of anger, anger that Carlos would do such a thing to a fellow innocent human being. However, as he gazed towards the face of the corpse, he realised it wasn't the body of the Syrixian. As he examined its head, he realised... he realised that it was the body of King Carlos. "Holy shit..." the AFI agent muttered.

After a brief period of time spent gazing in shock at the corpse, he called out to his fellow AFI agents. "You need to see this!" he shouted out. "Someone's killed Carlos, and hung him up!"

As the other agents gazed up in dread, he noticed a glimmer of polished silver. It was another guard, clad in medieval armour and brandishing an enormous, bloodstained steel sword. Without thinking,As the guard charged, the AFI agent raised his umbrella and squeezed the trigger once, two times, three times, into the chest of the guard. The bullets easily pierced the armour without being hindered, before going through the guard's chest. Each bullet spun and fragmented, shredding the guard's internal organs. The first pierced the intestines, pulverizing the membrane, causing the smell of half-digested food and faecal matter to spread throughout the room. The second minced the liver and stomach, and the third annihilated the heart and lungs.

The other agents heard the commotion, and quickly turned their attention towards the scene glanced over as the guard collapsed onto the floor. The shooter calmly walked towards the guard's corpse and pressed the trigger once more, into the guard's skull. The body convulsed once more, and then was still.

"Looks like this guy came to finish off the King killed the King." he noted, gesturing with his umbrella towards the bloodstained blade, which had clattered out of the guard's hand. "Well, we'd better start untying him" he finished, before stepping towards the rest of the group. "What are we waiting for? "All right, you Syrixians go free your hostages or whatever, we'll hold off any guards that show up. If they see the King's body you can bet your asses that they won't stop to find evidence exonerating us, that's for sure."
 
Very creepy.

Anyways Nebs, you ok/ready to post? I already have my response in meind.
 
I'll only be posting a reply on the IC thread once I get home from Derby; in about eight to ten hours time. Syrixia, will you be evacuating the hostages through the tunnel (or is the tunnel non-canon?), or back through the castle? And will all the troops be evacuated in the Chinooks, or will each nation evacuate their own troops? Or will the agents remain in Anola to carry out more espionage?
 
I've already discussed with McMasterdonia but, Carlos has a living relative and their name is Princess Vanessa Kjorg Rogueze IIV.
 
Xentherida:
I'll only be posting a reply on the IC thread once I get home from Derby; in about eight to ten hours time. Syrixia, will you be evacuating the hostages through the tunnel (or is the tunnel non-canon?), or back through the castle? And will all the troops be evacuated in the Chinooks, or will each nation evacuate their own troops? Or will the agents remain in Anola to carry out more espionage?
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1. The tunnel.

2. The chinooks.

3. They will leave. If they didn't, it would likely be seen as a casus belli. Plus, their mission will be complete once the hostages are safe in Syrixia.
 
You should probably ask the Syrixians if they wish to return to Syrixia, tbh. They are citizens of Añola.
 
My agents are undercover in almost every country in TNP. The ones who attacked the palace will leave, but the others will hold position.
 
Nebula:
My agents are undercover in almost every country in TNP. The ones who attacked the palace will leave, but the others will hold position.
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I beg to differ. Syrixia has tight security and the CIT knows all. If there were AFI agents in Syrixia, we would know. And there aren't. Atleast, I am OOCly stating I don't want there to be.

Anyways, @Cronaal: That is my plan. If they say yes to returning to Syrixia, they will be provided with a home and the government will help them find jobs. If not, the government will help them move into whatever country they choose to move into.
 
You have one agency handling both internal, external, and cyber intelligence? Baaad idea. Too much power in one place.

My point is that Nebula doesn't just have the AFI. There's the AIS (Administration for Internal Security, comparable to the DHS), which handles all internal security measures, and its offshoots, the ICI (Internal Committee of Investigation, comparable to the FBI), the CDC (Cyber Defense Committee, comparable to the NSA), and the UPF (Unified Police Force). But that's not all. There are other departments, administrations, and committees so secret I cannot name them, whose goals in some cases are to plant sleepers in other countries for long periods of time.
 
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