Scripted TG: Joining the WA

El Fiji Grande

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Each of the scripted telegrams are in need of an update. Some contain large inaccuracies, whereas others could make better use of spoilers and include references to new programs that might help newcomers become more involved. As such, I'm asking Home Affairs to draft new versions of these telegrams as part of an effort to comprehensively update each of our scripted telegrams. Thanks for your help. If you have any questions, feel free to ask me!
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Hey there, %NATION%!

Glad to see that you joined the World Assembly! I am writing to you to make sure you are aware of all the new possibilities World Assembly (WA) membership within The North Pacific has opened up to you.

Our region is the best place in NationStates for WA nations. It is no coincidence that we have by far the most WA nations among all regions in the world. You can [b][url=/page=dispatch/id=338371]read here everything you can do as a WA nation in The North Pacific[/url][/b], but here are some highlights:

[b]~ Become a General in the North Pacific Army![/b]
Have you ever noticed that, despite all the cool things this game has, it doesn't have war? Well, it actually does, and you can take part in it with your WA nation. You can learn all about the fascinating aspect of NationStates that is military gameplay by joining the North Pacific Army (NPA). The NPA is one of the strongest and most active militaries in the game, with a tradition of more than a decade in protecting The North Pacific, our allies, and our interests abroad. You can become part of this tradition, and start a military career full of exciting operations, medals and ribbons, and promotions all the way up to General. You can join here: [b][url]http://forum.thenorthpacific.org/topic/9145375/1/[/url][/b]

[b]~ Get yourself one of the biggest endorsement counts in the game![/b]
In The North Pacific, you can collect more endorsements than anywhere else in the game. This is both because we have a lot more WA nations than any other region, and because we are the only large region not to enforce strict endorsement regulations - as long as you have fewer endorsements than our Vice Delegate [b][nation=short]@@VICE_DELEGATE_NATION@@[/nation][/b], you are fine. Not only that, but we even give you free software tools to help you gather endorsements. Collecting endorsements is one of the best ways to get to know other nations in The North Pacific and make a name for yourself in the region. The larger your endorsement count, the higher your nation will rank in the prestigious World Census, likely higher than most delegates of other regions, and the faster its influence in the region will increase. You can [b][url=/page=dispatch/id=338372]read here all about why and how to collect endorsements[/url][/b].

[b]~ Vote on WA resolutions and determine more than 1000 other votes![/b]
As a member of the WA, you can vote on all resolutions that reach the WA floor. You can additionally participate in the threads created by the Ministry of World Assembly Affairs, where we discuss each resolution and vote to determine how our WA Delegate, [b][nation=short]@@DELEGATE_NATION@@[/nation][/b], uses the regional vote. This is by far the strongest regional vote in the game, and by taking part in the Ministry you get to directly influence it yourself - think of it like having 1000+ WA votes! You can check out the Ministry here: [b][url]http://forum.thenorthpacific.org/forum/39609/[/url][/b]

[b]~ Become an expert WA legislator![/b]
As a WA nation, you can draft and submit your own WA proposals, for consideration by the entire NationStates community. To assist you in your legislating efforts, our Ministry of World Assembly Affairs provides you with access to some of the most successful WA authors in all of NationStates. All of these experts volunteer their time to help you learn the ropes of WA legislating and advise you on how to maximize your proposals' chances of success. The Ministry even offers a WA 101 course on resolution writing, which you can check out here: [b][url]http://forum.thenorthpacific.org/topic/7238830/1/[/url][/b]

[b]~ Endorse our WA Delegate and Vice Delegate![/b]
Our WA Delegate, [b][nation=short]@@DELEGATE_NATION@@[/nation][/b] represents our region in the WA. The North Pacific already has the strongest regional vote in the WA, and the more endorsements [b][nation=short]@@DELEGATE_NATION@@[/nation][/b] has, the more powerful we become! If you are looking for another reason to endorse [b][nation=short]@@DELEGATE_NATION@@[/nation][/b], how about this one: doing so helps protect the region from external threats, and makes our community more secure and stable. And it is even better if you additionally endorse our Vice Delegate, [b][nation=short]@@VICE_DELEGATE_NATION@@[/nation][/b]. It goes without saying that you can expect [b][nation=short]@@DELEGATE_NATION@@[/nation][/b] and [b][nation=short]@@VICE_DELEGATE_NATION@@[/nation][/b] to return the favor and endorse you back.

[b]~ Become a Keeper of the North![/b]
In addition to Delegate [b][nation=short]@@DELEGATE_NATION@@[/nation][/b] and Vice Delegate [b][nation=short]@@VICE_DELEGATE_NATION@@[/nation][/b], you can consider endorsing all members of our [b][url=/page=dispatch/id=485372]Security Council[/url][/b]. In addition to making our region safer, doing so means your nation will become a [i]Keeper of the North[/i]. This helps make yourself better known within The North Pacific, and also makes it easier for you to gain more endorsements for your own nation. You can [b][url=/page=dispatch/id=801659]read here all about why and how to become a Keeper of the North[/url][/b].

Please feel free to contact me if you have any questions about the above, or about the WA in general. Once again, welcome to the World Assembly!

Best regards,
@@MINISTER_OF_WORLD_ASSEMBLY_AFFAIRS_NATION@@
Minister of World Assembly Affairs

https://www.nationstates.net/page=dispatch/id=338371
 
Just some thoughts first:
  • There are three separate points that basically say the same thing: Endorse the Delegate, Become Keeper of the North, Get a ton of endorsements. Basically, they're all saying: Endorse and get endorsed back
  • Why is the NPA listed first? What do we need the most right now, NPA or more endotarters? (That's a genuine question I hope someone could answer) That should determine what goes to the top of the list
Here's what I've changed so far:
Hey there, %NATION%!
Glad to see that you joined the World Assembly! I am writing to you to make sure you are aware of all the new possibilities World Assembly (WA) membership within The North Pacific has opened up to you.
Our region is the best place in NationStates for WA nations. It is no coincidence that we have by far the most WA nations among all regions in the world. You can read here everything you can do as a WA nation in The North Pacific, but here are some highlights:

~ Become a General in the North Pacific Army!
Have you ever noticed that, despite all the cool things this game has, it doesn't have war? Well, it actually does, and you can take part in it with your WA nation. You can learn all about the fascinating aspect of NationStates that is military gameplay by joining the North Pacific Army (NPA). The NPA is one of the strongest and most active militaries in the game, with a tradition of more than a decade in protecting The North Pacific, our allies, and our interests abroad. You can become part of this tradition, and start a military career full of exciting operations, medals and ribbons, and promotions all the way up to General. You can join here: http://forum.thenorthpacific.org/topic/9145375/1/

~ Get yourself one of the biggest endorsement counts in the game!
In The North Pacific, you can collect more endorsements than anywhere else in the game. This is both because we have a lot more WA nations than any other region, and because we are the only large region not to enforce strict endorsement regulations - as long as you have fewer endorsements than our Vice Delegate @@VICE_DELEGATE_NATION@@, you are fine. Not only that, but we even give you free software tools to help you gather endorsements. Collecting endorsements is one of the best ways to get to know other nations in The North Pacific and make a name for yourself in the region. The larger your endorsement count, the higher your nation will rank in the prestigious World Census, likely higher than most delegates of other regions, and the faster its influence in the region will increase. The first nation you should endorse is the Delegate @@DELEGATE_NATION@@, which will increase our (already number one) regional vote in the WA, followed by the Vice Delegate, @@VICE_DELEGATE_NATION@@ and all members of our Security Council. This will protect our region from external threats, and also lets you become a Keeper of the North, which makes you better known within The North Pacific and easier for you to gain more endorsements for your own nation. You can read more about why and how to collect endorsements here and more about why and how to become a Keeper of the North here.

~ Vote on WA resolutions and determine more than 1000 other votes!
As a member of the WA, you can vote on all resolutions that reach the WA floor. You can additionally participate in the threads created by the Ministry of World Assembly Affairs, where we discuss each resolution and vote to determine how our WA Delegate, @@DELEGATE_NATION@@, uses the regional vote. This is by far the strongest regional vote in the game, and by taking part in the Ministry you get to directly influence it yourself - think of it like having 1000+ WA votes! You can check out the Ministry here: http://forum.thenorthpacific.org/forum/39609/

~ Become an expert WA legislator!
As a WA nation, you can draft and submit your own WA proposals, for consideration by the entire NationStates community. To assist you in your legislating efforts, our Ministry of World Assembly Affairs provides you with access to some of the most successful WA authors in all of NationStates. All of these experts volunteer their time to help you learn the ropes of WA legislating and advise you on how to maximize your proposals' chances of success. The Ministry even offers a WA 101 course on resolution writing, which you can check out here: https://forum.thenorthpacific.org/forum/3063587/; as well as a Sponsorship program to help you turn your ideas into resolutions: https://forum.thenorthpacific.org/topic/9190307/

Lastly, remember, to unlock the full benefits of being a WA member in the North Pacific, you'll have to become a citizen first. You can do so in the forums here: https://forum.thenorthpacific.org/topic/9145386/

Please feel free to contact me if you have any questions about the above, or about the WA in general. Once again, welcome to the World Assembly!

Best regards,
@@MINISTER_OF_WORLD_ASSEMBLY_AFFAIRS_NATION@@
Minister of World Assembly Affairs

https://www.nationstates.net/page=dispatch/id=338371
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Hey there, %NATION%!

Glad to see that you joined the World Assembly! I am writing to you to make sure you are aware of all the new possibilities World Assembly (WA) membership within The North Pacific has opened up to you.

Our region is the best place in NationStates for WA nations. It is no coincidence that we have by far the most WA nations among all regions in the world. You can [b][url=/page=dispatch/id=338371]read here everything you can do as a WA nation in The North Pacific[/url][/b], but here are some highlights:

[b]~ Become a General in the North Pacific Army![/b]
[SPOILER]Have you ever noticed that, despite all the cool things this game has, it doesn't have war? Well, it actually does, and you can take part in it with your WA nation. You can learn all about the fascinating aspect of NationStates that is military gameplay by joining the North Pacific Army (NPA). The NPA is one of the strongest and most active militaries in the game, with a tradition of more than a decade in protecting The North Pacific, our allies, and our interests abroad. You can become part of this tradition, and start a military career full of exciting operations, medals and ribbons, and promotions all the way up to General. You can join here: [b][url]http://forum.thenorthpacific.org/topic/9145375/1/[/url][/b][/SPOILER]

[b]~ Get yourself one of the biggest endorsement counts in the game!
[/b]
[SPOILER]In The North Pacific, you can collect more endorsements than anywhere else in the game. This is both because we have a lot more WA nations than any other region, and because we are the only large region not to enforce strict endorsement regulations - as long as you have fewer endorsements than our Vice Delegate [b][nation]@@VICE_DELEGATE_NATION@@[/nation][/b], you are fine. Not only that, but we even give you free software tools to help you gather endorsements. Collecting endorsements is one of the best ways to get to know other nations in The North Pacific and make a name for yourself in the region. The larger your endorsement count, the higher your nation will rank in the prestigious World Census, likely higher than most delegates of other regions, and the faster its influence in the region will increase. The first nation you should endorse is the Delegate [b][nation]@@DELEGATE_NATION@@[/nation][/b], which will increase our (already number one) regional vote in the WA, followed by the Vice Delegate, [b][nation]@@VICE_DELEGATE_NATION@@[/nation][/b] and all members of our [b][url=/page=dispatch/id=485372]Security Council[/url][/b]. This will protect our region from external threats, and also lets you become a [i]Keeper of the North[/i], which makes you better known within The North Pacific and easier for you to gain more endorsements for your own nation. You can [b][url=/page=dispatch/id=338372]read more about why and how to collect endorsements here[/url][/b] and [b][url=/page=dispatch/id=801659]more about why and how to become a Keeper of the North here[/url][/b].[/SPOILER]

[b]~ Vote on WA resolutions and determine more than 1000 other votes![/b]
[SPOILER]As a member of the WA, you can vote on all resolutions that reach the WA floor. You can additionally participate in the threads created by the Ministry of World Assembly Affairs, where we discuss each resolution and vote to determine how our WA Delegate, [b][nation]@@DELEGATE_NATION@@[/nation][/b], uses the regional vote. This is by far the strongest regional vote in the game, and by taking part in the Ministry you get to directly influence it yourself - think of it like having 1000+ WA votes! You can check out the Ministry here: [b][url]http://forum.thenorthpacific.org/forum/39609/[/url][/b][/SPOILER]

[b]~ Become an expert WA legislator![/b]
[SPOILER]As a WA nation, you can draft and submit your own WA proposals, for consideration by the entire NationStates community. To assist you in your legislating efforts, our Ministry of World Assembly Affairs provides you with access to some of the most successful WA authors in all of NationStates. All of these experts volunteer their time to help you learn the ropes of WA legislating and advise you on how to maximize your proposals' chances of success. The Ministry even offers a WA 101 course on resolution writing, which you can check out here: [b][url]https://forum.thenorthpacific.org/forum/3063587/[/url][/b]; as well as a Sponsorship program to help you turn your ideas into resolutions: [b]https://forum.thenorthpacific.org/topic/9190307/[/b][/SPOILER]

Lastly, remember, to unlock the full benefits of being a WA member in the North Pacific, you'll have to become a citizen first. You can do so in the forums here: [b]https://forum.thenorthpacific.org/topic/9145386/[/b]

Please feel free to contact me if you have any questions about the above, or about the WA in general. Once again, welcome to the World Assembly!

Best regards,
@@MINISTER_OF_WORLD_ASSEMBLY_AFFAIRS_NATION@@
Minister of World Assembly Affairs

https://www.nationstates.net/page=dispatch/id=338371

Edit: Minor edits and use of spoilers
 
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