[SC - WITHDRAWN] Commend Kyorgia

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Commend Kyorgia
Category: Commendation | Target: Kyorgia
Proposed by: Toerana, Co-authored by: Kingdom of Circle of Magi and Viosionary Union | Onsite Topic


The Security Council,

Recognizing that the nation of Congratulations On Being Featured is a satellite state of Kyorgia, which sees them;

  • Document globally featured regions from 2015 onward, forever preserving their state when featured;
  • Supply constant encouragement supplied by its Foreign Office to governments of small and upcoming regions;


Understanding the dedication of its leadership to the Rejected Realms;

  • Seeing it serve as its Delegation to the World Assembly for a period of 212 days;
    • Solidifying its relationship with The North Pacific, which culminated in the signing of the Unicorn Star Treaty between the two parties. This saw to further solidify the security of the Rejected Realms by allying itself with a region with a large, robust military power;
    • Overseeing the “Epic Gamer Party,” a joint cultural event between the Rejected Realms and the North Pacific, seeing a week of cultural events and games that member states could participate in, an event in which the cultural identities of the two regions were strengthened;
    • Their stalwart support of The East Pacific during the attempted coup by the leadership of Fedele, ultimately seeing the Rejected Realms Army deploy in support of the legitimate government.
  • Serving as an Officer of Outreach within the Rejected Realms;
    • Their encouragement of Reject culture, hosting events such as "Wisdom of the Crowds," where delegations participated in competitions surrounding Reject Culture;
    • Producing Bulletins alerting World Assembly members to their failure to endorse the regional delegation.
  • Serving as Speaker of the Assembly;
    • Ensuring that the Reject Realms' democracy ran smoothly and every citizen had their voice;
    • Administering countless elections, seeing a untold number of citizens be elected to a range of elected offices.

  • Producing works of art for The Rejected Times, sharing the national cuisine of Kyorgia to an international audience.


Applauding the attempt to liberate Warzone Airspace from the hands of their Lazarene Occupiers;

  • Overseeing the formation of a new government to hand power back into the hands of regional natives;
  • Valiantly defending Warzone Airspace against multiple attempted invasions during the Second Liberation;
  • Providing Stalwart support of Rei I for over 100 days, in an attempt to secure the region from the Lazarene Occupiers.


Acknowledging that the former government of Arastaoir currently resides in Kyorgia, seeing their government serve two terms as Stateminister of Balder, serving for a total of 56 days, ensuring stability during transitional periods following the resignation of their predecessors;

Applauding the formation of Kyorgia Puppet Storage;

  • The Headquarters of the Kyosson Organization, which sees representatives from influential states participate in discourse surrounding a variety of important international issues;
  • The Home of the Kyosson Empire, an interregional body that sees the unification of diverse sections of the world under the banner of Kyorgia;
  • As a platform of representatives for a multitude of entities to interact from 25 allies states.


Impressed by the monumental collection of artwork gathered by art connoisseurs in the nation of Kyorgia, A collection valued at over 11,000 Bank, which includes artwork such as;

  • Seventeen copies of "Naughty Slave Girls," preserving multiple accounts of the priceless work of art for future generations;
  • Two first edition copies of Testlandia;
  • A small collection of artwork produced by allied "Featured Region Followers," to forever preserve the nations who recognize and support Featured Regions alongside Kyorgia's satellite state of Congratulations on Being Featured.


Inspired by the dedication the leadership of Kyorgia to military affairs; including

  • Having a rich military history, seeing their participation in many raider organisations, but later transitioning to become a member state of the Rejected Realms Army, further showing their dedication to the Rejected Realms and its ideals;
  • The foundation of Canterlot, a colourful organisation intent on spreading the colours of the rainbow and cartoon ponies across the world;
  • Seeing their military participate in the sieges of notable regions, such as Boston, South Pacific and Christmas


Believing that Kyorgia and its leadership is worthy of recognition from the Security Council in the form of a commendation.

Co-authored by Kingdom of Circle of Magi & Visionary Union
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I know people aren’t too keen on this, but this actually does a pretty good job in explaining Kyorgia’s varied achievements. For [Non-WA].
 
I see some proofreading issues and while I appreciate a light touch and some humor, I feel like this is bordering on trolling in places.. I would happily commend Kyorgia, but I think this one needs more time in the oven, and definitely needs better proofreading. I'm surprised it's been in the works since February, and still feels like it's moving too fast.

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Non WA, but this doesn't feel fleshed out. Kyo is deserving of a commend, but this one feels a bit lackluster.
 
Wait, this is serious?
When am I ever not serious?

I see some proofreading issues and while I appreciate a light touch and some humor, I feel like this is bordering on trolling in places.. I would happily commend Kyorgia, but I think this one needs more time in the oven, and definitely needs better proofreading. I'm surprised it's been in the works since February, and still feels like it's moving too fast.

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That's fair enough, I can't really say a whole lot to change your mind, besides it probably appears as a bit half baked because the majority of the feedback I was getting, naturally, was missing what I was going for. For the (relatively) short time I've known Kyorgia he has virtually never struck me as a very serious Gameplayer, but someone who likes to joke and mess around, so any proposal commending him taking a super serious approach, as many SC resolutions do, would feel off for me.

Granted, I did lean into that quite a bit as my research threw up very little of meaning.

Non WA, but this doesn't feel fleshed out. Kyo is deserving of a commend, but this one feels a bit lackluster.
I keep hearing that Kyo is commendable in the "traditional" way. I can see where people get that from, he's been around on NationStates for 7 Years and has done a lot, but he's done a lot that sits on both sides of the aisle. Prior to my joining of the game, I am aware he was fairly active within the raiding scene and did a lot there, hence the mention of Canterlot in the proposal, but I struggled, when I was originally researching this and prior to my decision to go all in with the non serious stuff, to dig up enough "commendable" material. For example, best I can tell, his work in Balder is simply lost to time, as that would have been perfect material for a commendation. I feel like he hasn't done enough traditional "commendable" stuff that can be found to push a jokeless commendation proposal. Granted, somewhere I probably missed something pretty major that would have been amazing for the proposal, but "oops" is all I can say to that.

Plus, as I said, it would feel off to me commending Kyorgia with a completely serious run of the mil commendation resolution.

Happy to answer any further questions on the topic though.
 
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I wouldn’t mind a commendation that has a sense of humor and therefore captures that aspect of the nominee. The reason why I feel it’s more trolling than just a light mood is because of what it’s choosing to highlight, including a puppet storage region. And maybe that’s just because that’s all you could find to accommodate that angle. If that’s so, I would have suggested changing the style of the sentences to contain the humor and don’t rely on the specific accomplishments to do that. If all the accomplishments were serious but presented in a humorous way, I think that would work for more people. If you can’t find enough material that is “serious” though, and most people do believe that Kyorgia is commendable, then perhaps you’re not talking to the right people, or you’re not the best person to write this one.
 
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