The North Pacific Welcome Dispatch

Atlae

TNPer
In the TNP Executive server, r3n came to us offering to set up a system which automatically posts the following on a weekly basis: https://www.nationstates.net/page=dispatch/id=1013189

It notifies people who have joined that week, who read the dispatch and become involved. It's another form of outreach, along with telegrams.

I came up with this draft of a dispatch:
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[background-block=#265780][hr][center][floatleft][img]http://b2.ifrm.com/10711/28/0/p1090384/tnp_header.png[/img][/floatleft][size=200][color=#dfecff]The North Pacific Handbook[/color][/size][/center][hr][center][size=150][color=#dfecff]Welcome![/color] [color=#dfecff]|[/color] [url=/page=dispatch/id=338935][color=#94c248]Why [i]You[/i] Should Be In TNP[/color][/url] [color=#dfecff]|[/color] [url=/page=dispatch/id=485373][color=#94c248]Ways To Get Involved[/color][/url] [color=#dfecff]|[/color] [url=/page=dispatch/id=338370][color=#94c248]WA Development Program[/color][/url] [color=#dfecff]|[/color] [url=/page=dispatch/id=850652][color=#94c248]RolePlay[/color][/url][/size][/center][hr][/background-block]

[floatright][box][align=justify][table][tr][center][b][Size=150][region]The North Pacific[/region][/size][/b][/center][hr]

[/tr][tr][center][b]Motto: [/b][i] "Where the democracy is strong, the debate 
robust, and the rum plentiful."[/i][/center][/tr][tr][td][center][IMG]http://b2.ifrm.com/10711/28/0/p3009130/tnp_flag_med.png[/IMG]

[b]Flag[/b][/center]

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[b]Coat of Arms[/b][/center]

[/td][/tr][tr][td][center][b]Forum: [/b][/center]

[/td][td][center][url=http://forum.thenorthpacific.org/]forum.thenorthpacific.org[/url][/center]

[/td][/tr][tr][td][center][b]Chat: [/b][/center]

[/td][td][center][url=https://discord.gg/0p2MoFJe5Tq8M3Kd]Discord[/url][/center]

[/td][/tr][tr][td][center][b]Map: [/b][/center]

[/td][td][center][url=http://forum.thenorthpacific.org/topic/9003207/1/]See here[/url][/center]

[/td][/tr][tr][td][center][b]Capital: [/b][/center]

[/td][td][center]Magicality City[/center]

[/td][/tr][tr][td][center][b]Demonym: [/b][/center]

[/td][td][center]North Pacifican[/center]

[/td][/tr][tr][td][center][b]Government: [/b][/center]

[/td][td][center]Republic[/center]

[/td][/tr][tr][td][center]Delegate [/center]

[/td][td][center][nation]Gladio II[/nation][/center]

[/td][/tr][tr][td][center]Vice Delegate [/center]

[/td][td][center][nation]Siwale[/nation][/center]

[/td][/tr][tr][td][center]Speaker [/center]

[/td][td][center][nation]Darcania[/nation][/center]

[/td][/tr][tr][td][center]Attorney General [/center]

[/td][td][center][nation]Goyanes[/nation][/center]

[/td][/tr][tr][td][center]Chief Justice [/center]

[/td][td][center][nation]Destroedor[/nation][/center]

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[size=150][color=265780]Welcome to The North Pacific![/color][/size]

Welcome to NationStates and The North Pacific (TNP)! It may seem a bit overwhelming at first, but in time you will find it to be a wonderful world that you get to be a part of! To help you reach that point, we wanted to let you in on a few tips that could really give you an engaging experience in The North Pacific. None of these, of course, are [i]required[/i], but rather recommendations that you can choose to skip if they don’t seem to fit you or do in any order you’d like. Just click the chevron ([>]) and you’ll warp right to where you want to be.

Please note that some of these steps require an account with The North Pacific’s [url=http://forum.thenorthpacific.org]forum[/url], and unfortunately it is rather difficult to skip that step and do many of the fun activities here. But it’s easy and you’ll be right on your way!
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[url=http://forum.thenorthpacific.org/register/][>][/url] [b]Create an account on our offsite forum![/b]
We coordinate most of our activity via the forum. Registering opens up a whole world of interesting activities to help you get the most out of your time in the region. So what are you waiting for! Join now!

[url=http://forum.thenorthpacific.org/topic/9145386/][>][/url] [b]Apply for Citizenship![/b]
Once you have registered, the next thing you want to do is apply for Citizenship. This will allow you to fully take part in our community. Being a citizen has many advantages; you can vote, participate in the legislature, and you can really call yourself a North Pacifican.

[url=http://forum.thenorthpacific.org/forum/39572/][>][/url] [b]Introduce Yourself![/b]
The next thing you want to do is introduce yourself. Start a thread and say "hey!" -- let us know a little about you and what your interests are. We’d [u]love[/u] to hear from you! You’ll blend right in when we know who you are.

[url=http://www.nationstates.net/page=un][>][/url] [b]Join the World Assembly![/b]
Having your nation in the World Assembly helps you to start building influence in the region. You should also check out our [url=https://www.nationstates.net/page=dispatch/id=338370]World Assembly Advancement Program[/url] for instructions on how to join the World Assembly, and for ideas on what to do once you are a member. You can also vote in the World Assembly or stack endorsements (endotarting) [url=http://forum.thenorthpacific.org/pages/endorse/]here![/url]

[url=https://discord.gg/G9yC8Km][>][/url] [b]Join one or more of our regional chats![/b]
We are a very social region and have several chats where our members get to know each other, hang out, and generally have fun. Consider joining our [url=https://discord.gg/G9yC8Km]Discord server[/url], or tuning in to [url=http://s6.zetaboards.com/Europeia/pages/mixlr/]EBC Radio[/url] on Mixlr.

[url=https://www.nationstates.net/page=dispatch/id=851343/][>][/url] [b]Read The North Pacifican Handbook![/b]
This essential handbook includes all the basic knowledge that one needs in The North Pacific and can be an invaluable resource in your first few weeks. However, if anything isn't clear, our experienced members are always more than willing to answer questions - just ask!

[url=http://forum.thenorthpacific.org/topic/7198621/][>][/url] [b]How can I Get Involved?[/b]
Do [i]you[/i] want to get an inside look on how The North Pacific runs every day? Would you like to get involved? Well, it’s a good thing that The North Pacific government is always hiring jobs in its ministries so you can get involved!

[url=http://forum.thenorthpacific.org/topic/9145375/][>][/url] [b]Join the Regional Army![/b]
Does a sedentary life bore you? Do you wish for action? Well, your region would love to hear from you; join the North Pacific Army (or NPA for short), one of the most active and longest running military forces in NationStates. It's a great way to build camaraderie with your fellow soldiers and develop a name for yourself in the region, as well as meet prominent members of other regions when out on operations. 

[url=http://forum.thenorthpacific.org/forum/39612/][>][/url] [b]Get Involved in the Regional Assembly![/b]
The Regional Assembly (or RA for short) is our lay-legislative body. All citizens can participate immediately, and it’s a great way to get started in a legislative or judicial career. Even registered residents can participate to a certain extent. If you have ambitions to be Speaker of our Senate, or a future Chief Justice, participating in the RA is the perfect starting point!

[url=http://forum.thenorthpacific.org/forum/3024521/][>][/url] [b]Roleplay with us![/b]
Do you like to tell stories about your nation? Lots of us here love to elaborate on anecdotes or essential parts of their nations’ history, working together and writing is one of the most fulfilling things to do in The North Pacific and NationStates. When it comes to roleplay, your imagination is the limit.

[url=http://forum.thenorthpacific.org/forum/3024520/][>][/url] [b]Join the Fun![/b]
Don't feel like getting too serious? Stretch and relax; join us while we partake in [url=http://forum.thenorthpacific.org/forum/39585/]Games and Arts[/url] or talk about [url=http://forum.thenorthpacific.org/forum/39588/]Real Life[/url] ([url=http://forum.thenorthpacific.org/forum/39580/]gasp[/url])!
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There’s so much to do in The North Pacific, and this guide only scratches the surface of all the things you can do here. Enjoy your time in TNP, and take time to discover what you love to do here. We’d just like to welcome each and every one of you, the future of our region. So welcome!

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If you have any questions, please contact Minister of Home Affairs [nation]Xagill[/nation]. We're here to help!

[size=150][color=265780]Other Useful Links[/color][/size]

Below are miscellaneous resources useful for all nations.

[list][*][b][u][url=/page=dispatch/id=851304]Government Index:[/url][/u][/b] Get to know your government by using this list of all government officials in TNP. If you have questions or suggestions about any aspect of the regional governance, feel free to send a telegram to the corresponding government official.[*][b][u][url=/page=dispatch/id=837619]Law Index:[/url][/u][/b] This is a compilation of all legal documents currently in force in TNP. This includes our Constitution and Bill of Rights, which form the basis of our government.[*][b][u][url=/page=dispatch/id=468684]World Assembly Voting Policy:[/url][/u][/b] Look here to learn how TNP's Delegate casts the regional vote on World Assembly resolutions, and how you can help determine that vote.[*][b][u][url=/page=dispatch/id=468681]Embassy Policy:[/url][/u][/b] If you are here as a diplomat from another region, please take a look at our policy for in-game and forum embassies.[*][b][u][url=/page=dispatch/id=851305]Recruitment Policy:[/url][/u][/b] If you are here to recruit for another region, please take a look at our policy on permissible and prohibited types of recruitment.[/list]

[i]This dispatch is updated automatically on a daily basis. Please do not edit manually.[/i]
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Thoughts?
 
Apply for Citizenship!
Once you have registered, the next thing you want to do is apply for Citizenship. This will allow you to fully take part in our community. Being a citizen has many advantages; you can vote, participate in the legislature, and you can really call yourself a North Pacifican.

Introduce Yourself!
The next thing you want to do is introduce yourself. Start a thread and say "hey!" -- let us know a little about you and what your interests are. We'd love to hear from you! You'll blend right in when we know who you are.
It's a bit presumptuous, not to mention repetitive and contradictory, to be telling people what they want to do and given that it specifically states earlier in the dispatch that 'none of the following is required.' It'll annoy a certain type of personality. One we don't have enough of as it is.

Get Involved in the Regional Assembly! The Regional Assembly (or RA for short) is our lay-legislative body. All citizens can participate immediately, and it’s a great way to get started in a legislative or judicial career. Even registered residents can participate to a certain extent. If you have ambitions to be Speaker of our Senate RA, or a future Chief Justice, participating in the RA Regional Assemblyis the perfect starting point!

I don't like the use of 'lay' here. It confused me a little, despite knowing what was meant. Go figure.
Perhaps use 'non-technical,' or some variation, or leave it out altogether?

The use of the word 'Senate' is both misleading and an Americanism, of sorts. My own alterations are duplicative, but I can't think of a better, and more accurate, way to phrase it.

[/pedantry]

The "New Foundings for the Forum" TG template has some concise and well-written bits in it that you might incorporate.

Also that same template would no longer be necessary or would, at the least, become repetitious, as well.
 
After some discussion with Siwale, I implemented a different approach for this:

Rather than post a new dispatch, the handbook maintainer script daily updates a list of "Today's featured nations" in the frontpage handbook dispatch.

This list is that day's new TNP nations (either new foundings, or nations that moved into the region).

That way, all of these nations automatically get a notification, they are pointed to the already existing most relevant dispatch, and we don't need to keep spamming new dispatches that duplicate the handbook's information.

Let me know what you think.
 
Read it over. Looks good.


A general question for anyone: I'd like to see Deputy Ministers listed in both the appropriate dispatches, as well as here at the forum.
In addition, the SC members should be listed in order of the LOS, imo.

Any idea who I should talk to about those?
 
Ah. My mistake. I'd based my previous suggestion on the erroneous assumption that the vote on the new LOS had concluded several days ago.
 
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