Actually, having spent too much time thinking about this again…I feel like there are still issues with the wording. The terms “government records” and “private government records” are mutually exclusive here, which means using the term in clause 30 would not allow private records to be released. So either we go back to the previous wording (which means we’re defining a term that doesn’t actually get used), or make a new definition for “government records” that includes private government records (perhaps something like “those which are kept on any platform utilized by the government and are not open to all residents”). On a separate but related issue, clause 29 says that private government records have to be declassified after a year, but makes no mention of regular government records, so maybe that needs to be changed too? Or is the thinking that it’s unnecessary to mandate the release of non-private records?
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