OOC Note: This thread will be in the vein of @Prydania 's For the King, to Valhalla thread. I am using the concept with his permission, so please check his work out. Please enjoy!
15 July 2005
3:45 pm
Bravondkraj, Arrandal
Dust, ash, blood. Gaelen Marishkov could smell it all. Where once a grand city had stood there were only ruins. The sounds and the smells threatened to overwhelm him, overwhelm his heightened senses.
He could hear it all, the sounds of the wounded and dying, the wails of the survivors looking for friends and family; banshees stumbling in shock through the smoke and the fires. All of the sensations, the fear and anger, crashed down upon him, washing over him, burning through him.
He stood among the ruined courtyard. What remained of the palace burned around him, fires raging in the skeleton of the towers of Aureljus, the Great Hall now a smoldering heap of cracked and blackened stones from which dark clouds of ash rose up into the sky. It was all mostly rubble, smoldering piles of ash, only a skeleton of walls and empty window sills. A large doorway stood alone, the walls around it gone, the stone arch having survived the bombing. Elsewhere a winding stairwell curved around and up three flights before ending in cracked stone, the floor it once led to now gone, part of the pile of rubble below.
I’m too late, he thought, and the wolf within him, always ready to surface at his call, rose up on its own and he let out a painful and ashamed howl. “Arrr-ooooooooo!”
But his howl was quiet, muffled, drowned out by the cries and chaos around him, the pain and the suffering. The Crimson Shroud had made their move, and now Bravondkraj was burning.
Damn you, Izakaya, Gaelen thought. He clenched his fists in anger, anger at her, but mostly anger at himself.
He let the rage burn inside him, as he scrambled through the broken remains of the Palat Roz. He dug at the rubble, pulling out bodies whenever he saw a hand or a foot sticking out. When he smelled someone he’d dig deeper, tearing his hands bloody as he dug. But he found no one alive.
A shadow loomed up in the haze, and then a man stepped out of the smoke. Blood flowed from a deep gash in his head. He wore a singed and bloody uniform of the Royal Hussars. Gaelen stopped him as he stumbled past, grabbing the man by the shoulders. “The Krolzon!* Have you seen the Krolzon?” But the hussar just stared past him blankly. Not even a fierce shake brought him out of his daze.
Galen pushed him to the side and climbed up and over a pile of rubble. He found himself right by the broken stairway he’d seen before. He sat down on the steps, the full weight of what had happened finally settling into his realization, and he wept.
He couldn’t help but feel that all this destruction was his fault. He’d known the Shroud was making plans. He knew they were preparing a massive attack. Iskaya had even told him plans were in motion. And he’d been angry at humanity for so long that for a moment, he was going to let it happen. And now it had, and his indecision had likely cost the royal family their lives.
Head in hands he thought of Nastazja, her beautiful face, and wondered would she look at him with contempt if she knew he was such a coward. He had stopped crying, the tears being replaced once again with rage.
And then he heard a quiet little voice call out, “Hello?”
He dropped his hands away from his face, surprised, thinking he’d imagined it. Then the voice came again. “Help me!”
It was coming from below the stairs. He dug into the rubble, pulling broken stone and cracked wood away. There, huddled beneath the stairs he found her. She was covered in gray dust, her eyes wide with fright. The dust had turned black where tears had run down her cheeks. Her dark hair was wild, and small bits of brick were caught up in it.
He pulled her out and she clung tightly to him. He could feel her trembling in his arms. His heightened sense of smell let him know who she was, a smell so close to her father's. “It’s alright, Jadzia,” he said, stroking her hair to calm her. “It’s alright, everything’s alright.”
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*Krolzon = King’s Consort
Anakin's Betrayal -- John Williams
15 July 2005
3:45 pm
Bravondkraj, Arrandal
Dust, ash, blood. Gaelen Marishkov could smell it all. Where once a grand city had stood there were only ruins. The sounds and the smells threatened to overwhelm him, overwhelm his heightened senses.
He could hear it all, the sounds of the wounded and dying, the wails of the survivors looking for friends and family; banshees stumbling in shock through the smoke and the fires. All of the sensations, the fear and anger, crashed down upon him, washing over him, burning through him.
He stood among the ruined courtyard. What remained of the palace burned around him, fires raging in the skeleton of the towers of Aureljus, the Great Hall now a smoldering heap of cracked and blackened stones from which dark clouds of ash rose up into the sky. It was all mostly rubble, smoldering piles of ash, only a skeleton of walls and empty window sills. A large doorway stood alone, the walls around it gone, the stone arch having survived the bombing. Elsewhere a winding stairwell curved around and up three flights before ending in cracked stone, the floor it once led to now gone, part of the pile of rubble below.
I’m too late, he thought, and the wolf within him, always ready to surface at his call, rose up on its own and he let out a painful and ashamed howl. “Arrr-ooooooooo!”
But his howl was quiet, muffled, drowned out by the cries and chaos around him, the pain and the suffering. The Crimson Shroud had made their move, and now Bravondkraj was burning.
Damn you, Izakaya, Gaelen thought. He clenched his fists in anger, anger at her, but mostly anger at himself.
He let the rage burn inside him, as he scrambled through the broken remains of the Palat Roz. He dug at the rubble, pulling out bodies whenever he saw a hand or a foot sticking out. When he smelled someone he’d dig deeper, tearing his hands bloody as he dug. But he found no one alive.
A shadow loomed up in the haze, and then a man stepped out of the smoke. Blood flowed from a deep gash in his head. He wore a singed and bloody uniform of the Royal Hussars. Gaelen stopped him as he stumbled past, grabbing the man by the shoulders. “The Krolzon!* Have you seen the Krolzon?” But the hussar just stared past him blankly. Not even a fierce shake brought him out of his daze.
Galen pushed him to the side and climbed up and over a pile of rubble. He found himself right by the broken stairway he’d seen before. He sat down on the steps, the full weight of what had happened finally settling into his realization, and he wept.
He couldn’t help but feel that all this destruction was his fault. He’d known the Shroud was making plans. He knew they were preparing a massive attack. Iskaya had even told him plans were in motion. And he’d been angry at humanity for so long that for a moment, he was going to let it happen. And now it had, and his indecision had likely cost the royal family their lives.
Head in hands he thought of Nastazja, her beautiful face, and wondered would she look at him with contempt if she knew he was such a coward. He had stopped crying, the tears being replaced once again with rage.
And then he heard a quiet little voice call out, “Hello?”
He dropped his hands away from his face, surprised, thinking he’d imagined it. Then the voice came again. “Help me!”
It was coming from below the stairs. He dug into the rubble, pulling broken stone and cracked wood away. There, huddled beneath the stairs he found her. She was covered in gray dust, her eyes wide with fright. The dust had turned black where tears had run down her cheeks. Her dark hair was wild, and small bits of brick were caught up in it.
He pulled her out and she clung tightly to him. He could feel her trembling in his arms. His heightened sense of smell let him know who she was, a smell so close to her father's. “It’s alright, Jadzia,” he said, stroking her hair to calm her. “It’s alright, everything’s alright.”
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*Krolzon = King’s Consort
Anakin's Betrayal -- John Williams
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