- TNP Nation
- sil_dorsett
- Discord
- sildorsett
Claidie noticed a small error in the document that could be misinterpreted as though her government denied the Phoenix Union's request to try and stop Scallendovia. Seeking to establish clarity, she brought it to Princess Puja's attention.
"Your Grace, in the third paragraph where it reads 'We have requested one of our members, the Principality of Sil Dorsett, request that Scallendovia leave this war. The request was denied,' that should be changed to say that Scallendovia denied the request to stand down. As it reads now, it might be interpreted as though I denied the Phoenix Union's request.
"Or perhaps we could strengthen it a little, where we say 'We requested that one of our members, the Principality of Sil Dorsett, issue a demand that Scallendovia leave this war. Scallendovia refused to comply with that demand.' What do you think?"
"Your Grace, in the third paragraph where it reads 'We have requested one of our members, the Principality of Sil Dorsett, request that Scallendovia leave this war. The request was denied,' that should be changed to say that Scallendovia denied the request to stand down. As it reads now, it might be interpreted as though I denied the Phoenix Union's request.
"Or perhaps we could strengthen it a little, where we say 'We requested that one of our members, the Principality of Sil Dorsett, issue a demand that Scallendovia leave this war. Scallendovia refused to comply with that demand.' What do you think?"