The Union of the Rose: Feedback Requested

Nightsong

Nightsong

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Me being me, I could not leave my Factbook well enough alone. After tearing apart some pages and rebuilding them from the ground (actually a lot harder than it should be...), I have restructured and modernized my nation across the board to make a bit more sense in the grand scheme of things in how some of the people are related across the vast expanse of time. As such I'd like to get some feedback on the changes made and if possible for people to poke through my Factbook and make sure I don't have any dead or broken links (bound to happen with 175+ pages of code). One of the biggest changes I made was the renaming of the Confederation of Kalti to the Union of the Rose. This was done to give the three countries a little bit more autonomy in their own internal affairs... That and I needed a change of pace with naming stuff. Furthermore, I have clarified the languages for each country: Kalti speaks Kaltic (Irish), Callaici speaks Callaician (Catalan) and Tir na Andalucia speaks Andalucian (Welsh).

Anyways, some key pages that I tweaked, tore apart or are brand new:
 
There is one thing I would like to point out.

Your military stats are a little weird, mainly your active to reservist ratio. Feasibly you want to keep at least half as many reservists as you have active. As I can tell you have over 750,000 active with about a tenth as much in reserves at 75,000. In a time of crisis that doesn't give you a very good pool of professional soldiers to call from.
 
Lord Lore:
There is one thing I would like to point out.

Your military stats are a little weird, mainly your active to reservist ratio. Feasibly you want to keep at least half as many reservists as you have active. As I can tell you have over 750,000 active with about a tenth as much in reserves at 75,000. In a time of crisis that doesn't give you a very good pool of professional soldiers to call from.
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I've edited the numbers so that each nation has a reserve force that is equal to 40% of the army's total number. Does that seem better to you?

Edit: Ignore the further breakdown in the table underneath... that will be in flux till I have the percentage and number down right.
 
Bump... I can always use some feedback on the re-work of my Factbook on how the information is presented and if all the links are working... That and general feedback is welcome as well.
 
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