So I finally came up with the storyline of my nation's pre-kingdom years. I intend to make a factbook dispatch out of it. I'd like some constructive criticism on it. Are there elements of the history which should be explained more clearly? Are there any that are unrealistic? I'd appreciate any honest opinion.
Settlement and The Anarchy (1578-1692)
The land that is now Plembobria was first settled by a nomadic people known as the Rethenites (for which the city of Rethel is named). There is little known about these people. The consensus among historians is that the they were either refugees or dissidents. Wherever they came from, they weren't welcome there. The Rethenites named the land they discovered "Plembobnyc," which was Rethenite for "rich land" or "abundant land." This name gradually became "Plembobria" in English.
The Rethenites introduced tarsiers to the area. They had a strange affinity for these small animals. However, they cared very little for cats. In fact, many historians think that a majority of them were allergic. The tarsier remains the national animal of Plembobria to this day.
As the Rethenites settled farther north, they began to cultivate crops in the fertile soil of what is now Northelfrith, Cherpis, and Mediglorn.
As more and more settlers came, land disputes quickly ensued. There was no government or judiciary to settle these controversies. This period is commonly referred to as "The Anarchy."
The Dynastic Era (1692-1784)
Seven large land-owning families struggled for power over the realm. They were the Houses of Pyr, Plinken, Clethel, Halbon, Cherpis, Glorn, and Frithia, each dynasty vying to establish its own kingdom over all of present-day Plembobria. These dynasties were not Rethenites, but were from various other groups of settlers which had landed in the country. Clethelbend was the only kingdom that attempted to bring peace by negotiating a confederacy between the states, but their attempts were futile. The economies of warring states relied heavily on slave labor. Most slaves were Rethenites.
Many historians, including Edward A. Hollingsworth, and Margaret Malgin assert that the supremacy of the non-Rethenites was important to the development of civilized life in Plembobria, and that the nation would be much less modern or sophisticated without it.
Unification (1784-1799)
In 1784, over two hundred years after the land had been discovered, two lost sailors arrived on the shore of Pyrandia -- Egbert Edwin Edward Flithen and Robert Uppey. The two men settled here, and became soldiers in the Duke of Pyr's army. As soldiers, they were repulsed by the warlike nature of the states, and the deplorable treatment of slaves. They formed a secret society of rebels: The Liberty League. Many Pyrandian soldiers, including top military officers, who had been disenfranchised with the constant state of war joined the League. The League's mission was to topple the Duke of Pyr, and then convince soldiers to join them, in order to form a new nation.
The Liberty League was divided into two parts: the Northern League, led by Egbert, and the Southern League, led by Robert. Their military strategy was to "squeeze" Pyrandia from the north and south. The land conquered in the north was called Crilalia. The land conquered in south was called Flithendale. Operatives of the League fomented slave rebellions throughout the land. These rebellions led to the deposition of each dynasty. The Halbons were overthrown in 1786, followed by the Cherpis (1787), the Frithians and the Glorns (1789), and the Plinkens (1791). Egbert ordered the rebels not to execute the members of each dynasty. He instead instructed them to bring the families to Flithendale, where they would be tried for their crimes. Egbert wrote that "[it] would be immoral to treat these tyrants as they have treated the rest of Humanity. We fight for Justice, and Justice we shall serve."
The Duke of Pyr finally surrendered in 1798. Both Egbert and Robert chose not to take control of the land he had left behind, instead replacing it with the Province or Pyrandia
Senior members of the Liberty League suggested that Egbert be made a King. Egbert was originally averse to the idea. He wanted a republic. However, the lack of power led to local conflict among the people, most notably in Plinkenshire. Robert stated he would support a monarchy if his dominion, Crilalia, could be autonomous. Egbert agreed stating that "Crilalia will ever serve as a force to keep the Crown accountable." The Act of Settlement, which officially established the Kingdom of Plembobria was signed on March 14, 1799. Each former warring kingdom became a province in the new kingdom, except for Plinkenshire, which was divided. Slavery was outlawed.