Darcania submits the following proposal:
The new solution should be more self-explanatory than the previous amendment, but if you need us to explain it, feel free to ask.
We also added a clause to prevent amending amendments, so that maintaining and reading proposals and their amendments should be easier. If you wish to amend an amendment, simply amend what that amendment amends and your new amendment will override the old amendment.
(Edit: Verb tense.)
Proposal:Procedure Amendment #2
Resolution #1, Procedure for the Discussion and Adoption of Proposals, will be amended as follows:
- Clauses 10 and 11 shall be struck from the resolution.
- The following Clauses shall be added to the resolution:
- Amendments that seek to amend amendments are invalid.
- A proposal cannot succeed if all members who have not yet voted voting "Nay" would cause the proposal to fail.
- A proposal cannot fail if all members who have not yet voted voting "Aye" would cause the proposal to succeed.
The new solution should be more self-explanatory than the previous amendment, but if you need us to explain it, feel free to ask.
We also added a clause to prevent amending amendments, so that maintaining and reading proposals and their amendments should be easier. If you wish to amend an amendment, simply amend what that amendment amends and your new amendment will override the old amendment.
(Edit: Verb tense.)