NPA Report TNS XV

[Rom]

NPA Report

by Rom, War Correspondent
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Leadership

Minister of Defense: Trondstorm
Deputy Minister of Defense: Colonel Rom
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During the month of December, the NPA participated in a variety of operations. Whether it was going on tag runs, doing some detags, raiding regions with our allies, or partaking in a liberation or two, we definitely had plenty of operations to do in December.


Having just wrapped up our hold in Cretanja Queendom with our allies, we decided to go on a joint tag run with TBH on the 7th of December. In this joint tag run, there were three teams of tag raiders that consisted of both TBH and NPA soldiers, and we were able to tag well over 40 regions between the three teams. We also participated in another raid with TBH, and other allies including the ERN, LWU, LKE, and Balder. With NPA soldiers and soldiers from those allied militaries, we partook in a raid of Cretenja Kingdom during the 22 of December. The NPA would also proceed to stay in the region, and help our friends hold the region until the conclusion of that operation.


The NPA also did several solo operations during the month of December as well, including several tag runs, a detag run, some liberations, and a successful defense as well. During the month of December, we did five tag runs, and tagged a total of 16 regions. Besides the tag runs, we also did a detag run, where we detagged 5 regions. We also liberated our close ally Stargate on the 23rd of December. Other operations the NPA did over December was a Liberation of the region The Tyrannian Empire, where we thwarted a refound attempt that was made by The Vedigothic Imperium during the December 16 Major. During that same update, the NPA also successfully defended a region, World Alliance of Kingdoms and Empires, from a TVI invasion, that one with the help of TITO.


The NPA concluded 2019 with a tag run on the 27th of December, where we tagged a total of 4 regions. We had a very great 2019, where we continued to partake in a wide variety of operations, and we kept ourselves very busy over the last year.

 

[Darcania]

I see some factual inaccuracies and a minor grammatical error.

We also participated in another raid with TBH, and other allies including the ERN, LWU, LKE, and Balder. With NPA soldiers and soldiers from those allied militaries, we partook in a raid of Cretenja Kingdom during the 22 of December.

Fact check: it's Cretanja Queendom, not Cretenja Kingdom. Note that "Cretenja" is a misspelling, and that the second E should be an A instead: "Cretanja".

Besides the tag runs, we also did a detag run as well, where detagged 5 regions.

"Besides the tag runs, we also did a detag run, as well, where we detagged 5 regions."
Missing a comma and a subject to the second clause.

The Tyrannian Kingdom

It's "The Tyrannian Empire".

During that same update, the NPA also successfully defended a region from a TVI invasion, that one with the help of TITO.

The region defended was "World Alliance of Kingdoms and Empires", if you want to mention it.

 

[Gorundu]

"Besides the tag runs, we also did a detag run, as well, where we detagged 5 regions."
Missing a comma and a subject to the second clause.

"also" and "as well" mean the same thing, so one of them should be removed in that sentence.