WA Voters for WA Ministry

[Tadovan]

Hey there!

I noticed that you are an active, voting member of the World Assembly (WA). The WA is a great part of Nationstates that allows nations to propose and vote on legislation that affects the thousands of nations with WA membership. But this isn't the only way to influence the World Assembly.

The North Pacific (TNP) has a Ministry of World Assembly Affairs, which allows nations in the region to impact the vote of our delegate, [nation=short]Pallaith[/nation]. Because the delegate with the most endorsements receives more votes in the WA, this can sometimes swing a resolution to pass or fail on it's own. Not only that, but it influences the vote of other members of TNP and other regions as well. 

The ministry will also help review any resolution you may write for legality and feasibility, through our World Assembly Legislative League (WALL) project. WALL is a partnership between several regions to enhance our power and influence on the world assembly.

Now, you don't need to have membership in the executive staff of the ministry to participate in discussions or our regional vote on resolutions, but it gives you access to early discussions and doesn't cost you anything but a minute of your time to sign up.

[spoiler=Important Links][list][*]You may apply for citizenship in TNP here: http://forum.thenorthpacific.org/topic/7306731
[*]You may apply for membership for the executive staff of the ministry here: http://forum.thenorthpacific.org/topic/7198621
[*]And take a look at current ministry happenings here: http://forum.thenorthpacific.org/forum/39609/
[*]The forums for WALL are here: http://forum.thenorthpacific.org/forum/3063587/[/list][/spoiler]

Join the Ministry of World Assembly Affairs today, and see how you can make a difference!

Thanks,
[nation=short]Your Nation[/nation]

 

[Siwale]

Excellent draft! Just a few suggestions:
1. It should be made clear that any WA nation in TNP can participate in the voting and discussion of current proposals. They do not need to be a member of the ministry.
2. This TG is sent through our recruitment office. So it will not be a security councilor who sends it but instead a member of our staff.
3. A link to the WALL forum may be useful as well.

 

[abc]

You can change the wording a little and make it sound a bit nicer, but otherwise great!

 

[Darcania]

You can change the wording a little and make it sound a bit nicer, but otherwise great!

May I suggest more specific feedback? That sounds incredibly vague and hard to work with...