[DRAFT] North Pacific Army

[Owenstacey]

North Pacific Army News

The North Pacific Army are a group of North Pacific nations that come together to defend the peace of the North Pacific and other regions in NationStates. The NPA are currently led by the Minister of defence, who this term is Gladio.
Over the past month, the North Pacific Army have had a hugely successful period of deployments.At the start of the current period, the North Pacific Army were deployed in The East Pacific, who are one of our close allies. We were deployed there to assist their government in peacefully resolving an internal issue that they were faced with at the time. This turned out to be a hugely successful operation, with us not only helping them resolve the issue, but we were able to break a short standing record for the number of NPAers on an operation with 30 nations taking part in the operation. This broke the record set not long previously, when 28 NPAers took part in an operation in the Pacifican Union.
Then later after a fairly quiet christmas period, the NPA came back and were required to spend some time deployed in our ally Taijitu after their Founder CTEd. This action was deemed necessary by the defence ministry in order to secure the region until they were able to find a solution to this problem. This was again a successful operation, with us holding the region until the founder returned. The NPA were able to deploy 22 NPAers for this operation which
Shortly after the deployment in Taijitu, the NPA were took part in a training operation in Warzone Australia. This operation was a success, with 7 NPAers taking part in the operation. This was a very good number of people taking part in this training exercise during one of the updates.
These very successful operations during the last month show how the current Minister of Defence, Gladio, has been able to develop an effective and very active army that can be deployed in good number in a matter of hours.
At this current time the NPA are undertaking an operation in the region named Nations without a Region. The operation is looking to be a huge success with 22 NPAers being deployed at the time of writing.

 

[Darcania]

Small factual corrections: It is the Ministry of Defense, with an S (yes, the forum name is incorrect), and the operation on Nations Without a Region has already completed with 23 participants.

 

[Kaschovia]

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The North Pacific Army are is a group collection of North Pacific nations primarily respondible for that come together to maintaining the peace of the North Pacific and defending its allies. and other regions in NationStates. The NPA is led by Gladio, the current Minister of Defense. are currently led by the Minister of Defence, who this term is Gladio.

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Then, later after a fairly quiet christmas period, the NPA were came back and were required to spend some time deployed in to our ally Taijitu after their Founder CTEd ceased to exist. ThisAction was deemed necessary by the defence ministry in order to secure the region until they were able to find a solution to this could solve the problem. This was Once again, a successful operation, with us holding the region until the founder returned. The NPA were able to deploy 22 NPAers troops for this operation. which

Shortly after the deployment in Taijitu, the NPA were took part in a training operation in Warzone Australia. This operation was a success, with 7 NPAers troops taking part in the operation. This was a very good number of people taking part in this for a training exercise during one of the updates.

These very The successful of the operations during the last month show how the current Minister of Defencse, Gladio, has been able to develop an effective and very active army that, in a matter of hours, can be deployed in good number. in a matter of hours.

At this current time the NPA are undertaking an operation in the region named Nations without a Region. The operation is looking to be a huge success with 22 NPAers being deployed at the time of writing.

A few days ago, the NPA completed another operation in a region named 'Nations without a Region. This operation was successful, with 23 troops deployed.

Spoiler: Clean Edit

The North Pacific Army is a collection of nations primarily responsible for maintaining the peace of The North Pacific and defending its allies. The NPA is led by Gladio, the current Minister of Defense.

Over January, the NPA has had a hugely successful period of deployments. At the start of the month, the NPA was deployed to The East Pacific, one of our closest allies. We peacefully assisted their government in resolving an internal issue that faced them at the time. This was a hugely successful operation, it not only helped them resolve the issue, but was able to break the record for the highest number of troops on an operation, with 30 nations taking part. This broke the previous record of 28 troops in the Pacifican Union operation.

Then, after a fairly quiet Christmas period, the NPA was deployed to our ally Taijitu after their Founder ceased to exist. Action was necessary to secure the region until they could solve the problem. Once again, a successful operation, with us holding the region until the founder returned. The NPA was able to deploy 22 troops for this operation.

Shortly after the deployment in Taijitu, the NPA took part in a training operation in Warzone Australia. This operation was a success, with 7 troops taking part. This was a very good number of people for a training exercise during one of the updates.

The success of the operations during the last month show how the current Minister of Defense, Gladio, has been able to develop an effective and active army that, in a matter of hours, can be deployed in good number.

A few days ago, the NPA completed another operation in a region named 'Nations without a Region'. This operation was successful, with 23 troops deployed.

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