Scorch

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As the largest region in the NationStates it requires a large staff to ensure that the region runs smoothly and in order to ensure that the staff runs smoothly leaders are required to direct their Ministries. Unfortunately, there are often events that necessitate the abandonment of a post, former Minister Tomb has resigned as the Minister of Home Affairs due to real life.

The next day, Delegate Plembobria appointed Scorch, a Deputy of Tomb's to the position. Scorch is a newcomer to the region having joined the forum on September 1st, attracted by the General Election. He first joined the Ministries of Home Affairs as a member of the Executive Staff. On the 18th of September, Tomb recruited him to the position of Deputy. Scorch has experience creating, posting and managing the recruitment lists and has been a Forum Mentor.

Scorch hopes to "keep up the productivity that we have had this term" and to ensure that the Forum Mentoring program put into place by his predecessor continues the mentoring program going strong.

The Ministry of Home Affairs is one of the most vital Ministries to The North Pacific, responsible for recruiting and maintaining an influx of new nations. The Ministry regularly sends out thousands of manual telegrams in order to recruit nations. This term, Tomb reintroduced an abandoned program to provide mentors to individuals on our off-site forums. Scorch has since elaborated on that by reviewing and improving the ten automated telegrams used by The North Pacific.

Minister of Home Affairs for The North Pacific tend to become the Delegate of The North Pacific, we look forward to see what Scorch brings to the community.
 
Alright Praetor, here are my proposed edits to your article:

As the largest region in the NationStates, The North Pacific it requires a large staff to ensure that the region runs smoothly, and in order to ensure that the staff runs smoothly leaders are required to direct their Ministries. Unfortunately, there are often events that necessitate the abandonment of a post, and in the case of former Minister of Home Affairs Tomb has resigned as the Minister of Home Affairs the resignation was due to real life.

The next day, Delegate Plembobria appointed Scorch, a Deputy Minister of Home Affairs of Tomb's, to the position. Scorch is a newcomer to the region, having joined the forum on September 1st, as one of the new citizens attracted by the General Election. He first joined the Ministriesy of Home Affairs as a member of the Executive Staff. On the 18th of September, Tomb recruited him to the position of Deputy. Scorch has experience creating, posting and managing the recruitment lists and has been a Forum Mentor.

Scorch hopes to "keep up the productivity that we have had this term" and to ensure that the Forum Mentoring program put back into place by his predecessor continues the mentoring program going strong.

The Ministry of Home Affairs is one of the most vital Ministries to The North Pacific, responsible for recruiting and maintaining an influx of new nations. The Ministry regularly sends out thousands of manual telegrams in order to recruit nations. This term, Tomb reintroduced an abandoned program to provide mentors to individuals on our off-site forums. Scorch has since elaborated on that by reviewing and improving the ten automated telegrams used by The North Pacific.

Ministers of Home Affairs for The North Pacific tend to become the Delegate of The North Pacific, so we look forward to seeing what Scorch brings to the community.
 
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