[DRAFT] Recommendation Repeal Liberate Singapore

[Sil Dorsett]

The native population of Singapore has returned to power with the withdrawal of raider forces, and the residents now wish to implement their own measures to secure the region. We must also not forget that the original liberation resolution was unsupported by both The North Pacific and the natives, as it contained a covert self-commendation for The Invaders. The Invaders have repeatedly attempted to use liberations and condemnations as a backhanded way of glorifying themselves and we will continue to oppose them. Security Council Resolution #209 must be repealed to allow the government of Singapore to bring security and stability to the region, and remove the taint The Invaders left behind.

For these reasons, the Ministry of World Assembly Affairs recommends a vote for the resolution.

Spoiler: Draft 1 to Draft 2 changes

The native population of Singapore has returned to power with the withdrawal of raider forces, and the residents now wish to implement their own measures to secure the region. We must also not forget that the original liberation resolution was undesirable, unsupported by both The North Pacific, and unsupported by the natives, as it contained a covert self-commendation for the raiding force The Invaders. The Invaders have repeatedly attempted to use liberations and condemnations as a backhanded way of glorifying themselves and we will continue to oppose them. Security Council Resolution #209 must be repealed to allow the government of Singapore to bring security and stability to the region, and remove the taint the raiders The Invaders left behind. The time has come to bring the liberation effort to its conclusion.

For these reasons, the Ministry of World Assembly Affairs recommends a vote for the resolution.

Definitely a rough draft, looking for suggestions and changes.
Q1: Anything else you all can think of to strengthen this recommendation?
Q2: Should I just mention The Invaders by name?

 

[Pallaith]

If you want to reference the self-commend, you can link this to the others that we opposed because The Invaders were playing games. We have named them before.

Minor tweaks, I would say withdrawal instead of withdraw, I would stick with the unsupported stuff and take out undesirable, and maybe the last line. It's not bad but we don't necessarily need it either. It's purely a stylistic thing I guess. Otherwise it's a solid draft.

 

[Pallaith]

Beautiful, I think this works. I will get it published shortly pending any additional comments.

 

[Pallaith]

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[u]Resolution at vote:[/u] [b][url=page=sc]Repeal Liberate Singapore[/url][/b]
[u]Forum voting thread:[/u] [b]http://forum.thenorthpacific.org/topic/9023739/[/b]
[u]Vote recommendation:[/u] [b]For[/b]
[spoiler=Ministry review][i]Written by [b][nation=short]sil_dorsett[/nation][/b][/i]
The native population of [region]Singapore[/region] has returned to power with the withdrawal of raider forces, and the residents now wish to implement their own measures to secure the region. We must also not forget that the original liberation resolution was unsupported by both The North Pacific and the natives, as it contained a covert self-commendation for The Invaders. The Invaders have repeatedly attempted to use liberations and condemnations as a backhanded way of glorifying themselves and we will continue to oppose them. Security Council Resolution #209 must be repealed to allow the government of Singapore to bring security and stability to the region, and remove the taint The Invaders left behind.

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