[DRAFT] Recommendation Condemn the Invaders

Pallaith

TNPer
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This resolution, like the previous one written for the liberation of Social Liberal Union, is even more ingratiating and obsequious toward The Invader Network. Having failed in the previous attempt at passing the sycophantic liberation proposal of SLU, the obvious intent of this resolution is to wear the condemnation as a "badge of honor". The resolution itself is peppered with words of praise for The Invaders, using phrases such as "large and infamous" to describe them. As further proof of its insincerity, the nation that proposed this WA resolution even included a passage claiming "that The Invaders...have infiltrated this august body itself in order to promote its destructive ways" [emphasis added]. This is shameless and blatant propaganda masquerading as a condemnation, and should not be seen as anything but. It would behoove us as a region to deny The Invaders the satisfaction of having this resolution pass.

For these reasons, the Ministry of World Assembly Affairs recommends a vote against the resolution.

Big thanks to Ash for drafting a really awesome recommendation. I like the greater use of direct quotes compared to what we used previously, and the vocabulary is top notch. I do wonder if we need to be quite so fancy considering the people who will be reading these, but I definitely like how it reads now too. Anything more to be added here guys, or suggested changes? It's a really strong start, could even be what we end up with. Your thoughts, as always, are appreciated.
 
Not enough big words.

"that The Invaders...have infiltrated this august body itself in order to promote its destructive ways" [emphasis added].

I don't see an added emphasis here?
 
Praetor:
Not enough big words.

"that The Invaders...have infiltrated this august body itself in order to promote its destructive ways" [emphasis added].

I don't see an added emphasis here?
Just be glad I decided against including the word "pusillanimous".

I may have forgotten to include the added emphasis in my message to Pallaith. Here is how it should read:

"that The Invaders...have infiltrated this august body itself in order to promote its destructive ways" [emphasis added].
 
Nope, you remembered. I was just sloppy. Everything about that draft, including the emphasis, was spot on.
 
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