Friend of a music person

[AnarchistParadiso]

https://soundcloud.com/anticlimaxdubstep/stereotronique-sebastian

My friend is entering a competition and this is the song he entered. Could he have some feedback/support? Cheers.

 

[Great Bights Mum]

Unlistenable. But then, I'm an old person. My 16 year old liked it.