I understand the intent of making this proposal and agree to a small extent, however, I've spotted a few things within the points and I don't know how to explain without writing 2 pages worth of text(over-exaggeration) or making it overall confusing.
I do agree with Boston Castle's above post...
I still don't quite understand what the goal is hereafter rereading it thrice. What I think it's talking about is offshoring?
Hence my misunderstanding of the entirety of the proposal, I choose to currently ABSTAIN.